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這個瓶子充滿著愛情
當瓶子被打開的瞬間
愛情魔法的旅途即將開始
直到愛情的旅途到達終點時
魔力才會消失

以詩形式來翻譯.

This bottle filled with love,

Opens in the trice

When the magical journeys of love arise

Not till the end of the journeys of love

Will the enchantment vanish thereof.

** 押韻

Trice, Arise

Love, Thereof

In a trice = 瞬間, 立刻

不以詩形式來翻譯:

This bottle is filled with love,

At the instant when the bottle is opened,

The journey of the magic of love begins,

Not until the end of the journey of love,

Will the power of magic disappear.