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在他們出道前,Mnet幫他們拍攝了11集的紀錄片。
After the lineups for the group was finally made, the television network Mnet released an eleven episode documentary that showed the members in training before their debut as an official group.

11集記錄片就引起了很多人的關注,在網上的收看次數就達到了160萬次,在Fans論壇也有數萬名的Fans註冊。
The documentary film attracted many people .It was clicked over than one billion and six hundred thousand times. And there were hundreds and thousands of people in their fan club before their debuts.

每位成員都有成solo歌手的實力,所以從第一張單曲開始收錄成員們的solo作品。
Each member has the strength can be a solo singer. So, they have productions since they had issued their first single.

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Grammar/word usage:

After ..., the television network Mnet released the eleven documentaries that showed the members in training before their debut as an official group.

 

These documentaries attracted many people’s attention.

=> use plural nouns for documentaries to describe more than one documentary.

 

Translation:

在他們出道前,Mnet幫他們拍攝了11集的紀錄片。

=> Before their debut, Mnet filmed eleven documentaries on behalf of them. 

 

Grammar/word usage:

It was watched over 1.6 million times and there were hundreds and thousands of people in their fan club before their debut.

=> 160 = 1,600,000 = 1.6 million = one million and six hundred thousand.

 

Or,
=> It was watched over 1.6 million times with millions and millions of fans.

 

Each member has his strength and can be a solo singer.  So, solos have been recorded on their albums since their first singles.

 

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